[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2011 02:06 PM Title: Tuesday's Pick Up
I love the fact that Adorable uses Google for sex tips with Perky.
A very hot, yet ridiculously sweet chapter. I love that she orgasms as he professes his love for her. I reckon that's real progress for perky - and not just on the cum scale. She's done something with Adorable that she never does with other men. For her that seems like a huge deal.
Am looking forward to seeing where this goes, but am pretty apprehensive. I'm in no doubt it's gonna get pretty bumpy for them.
Author's Response:
Thanks for all of your reviews, Jo... I always write bumpy rides, but I'm hoping this one's enjoyable along the way. M
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2011 01:49 PM Title: Monday's Pick Up, Week 4
Ooh, things are getting interesting with Adorable and Crackle moving up the chain. Not liking the notion of Carlisle being a Don. Methinks things could get messy and awkward for Adorable and Perky...
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2011 12:22 PM Title: Thursday's Pick Up, Week 2
Love Nessie as the truck!!
Date: Mar 14, 2011 12:05 PM Title: Pick Me Up, Let Me Down
Oh dear. Brilliant!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2011 11:54 AM Title: Thursday's Pick Up
Hahaha, the sight of Newton in a nasty wifebeater and boxers with his belly peaking out really isn't something you should witness before noon! ;)
Really sweet chapter and I love the interaction between Mr. Adorable and Ms. Perky. :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2011 12:26 PM Title: Sigh
YES.
LOVE!
She is so fucking cute. And I don't even know if that's appropriate in describing a high class hooker. But damn, she is.
XOXOXOXO!
Author's Response:
JO!!! omg. You kill me. In a good way.
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2011 12:26 PM Title: Monday's Pick Up, Week 2
Fucking love this one!
They are incredibly adorable together and I am so giggling like an idiot over Emmett.
He kills me.
*sigh*
NEXT!
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2011 12:26 PM Title: Thursday's Pick Up
LOVE.
My god woman, you are fascinating me with this one.
I loved the description of Newton.
The Ms. perky and Mr. Adorable.
It's all just fucking perfect.
Their interactions are killing me.
TOO LITTLE TOO MUCH! know what I mean?
Just...ADORING them!
Cunt wait to see what happens next time!
LOVE you TONS!
xoxoxoxoxo
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2011 12:25 PM Title: Heading to the Depot
AH I should have copy pasted what I had in that PM...dammit!
Here's chappy 1 notes:
OMG! I can't believe you've shared this with ME!
I fucking love you!
I love this! It is PRICELESS! And I love what you've done with this simple crazy idea! LOL!
You rock my world, BD. ROCK IT! She is fucking awesome and Edward is awesome and I love how she is swooning over him throwing the trash in! LMFAO!
FLUFFING LOVE IT!
THANK you for sharing this awesomeness with me lady. I needed a smile o rama lama!
XOXOXOXO!
POST!
And here is chappy 2!
LMFAO! "How the hell did she go through all of those condoms since last Thursday? We pick up the trash twice a week. Four days. Countless condoms. I had to get home to think about that. With my bottle of Skin So Soft. Think long and hard."
DED!
You = awesomeness...at all times.
LOVE so much.
xoxoxoxoxo
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2011 12:25 PM Title: Monday's Pick Up
LMFAO!
Still..fucking...HILARIOUS.
I'm so glad you posted this and I am giggling like an idiot, lady.
Need to find time for chappy 3 of TPoL today...seriously.
LOVE YOUR FACE!
xxoxoxoxoxo
Date: Feb 21, 2011 02:21 PM Title: Monday's Pick Up
Thanks for the invite and for your review! It's such a relief to laugh while I write instep of contemplating the meaning of life and shit! M
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2011 02:19 PM Title: Heading to the Depot
I really like what you have so far :) Looking forward to Edward finding out about Bella's profession and how he deals with it.
Thanks for submitting to the GSF.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the invite and for your review! It's such a relief to laugh while I write instep of contemplating the meaning of life and shit! M