Date: Mar 15, 2011 02:06 PM Title: Tuesday's Pick Up
I love the fact that Adorable uses Google for sex tips with Perky.
A very hot, yet ridiculously sweet chapter. I love that she orgasms as he professes his love for her. I reckon that's real progress for perky - and not just on the cum scale. She's done something with Adorable that she never does with other men. For her that seems like a huge deal.
Am looking forward to seeing where this goes, but am pretty apprehensive. I'm in no doubt it's gonna get pretty bumpy for them.
Thanks for all of your reviews, Jo... I always write bumpy rides, but I'm hoping this one's enjoyable along the way. M
Date: Mar 14, 2011 11:54 AM Title: Thursday's Pick Up
Hahaha, the sight of Newton in a nasty wifebeater and boxers with his belly peaking out really isn't something you should witness before noon! ;)
Really sweet chapter and I love the interaction between Mr. Adorable and Ms. Perky. :)
Date: Feb 28, 2011 12:26 PM Title: Thursday's Pick Up
My god woman, you are fascinating me with this one.
I loved the description of Newton.
The Ms. perky and Mr. Adorable.
It's all just fucking perfect.
Their interactions are killing me.
TOO LITTLE TOO MUCH! know what I mean?
Cunt wait to see what happens next time!
LOVE you TONS!
Date: Feb 28, 2011 12:25 PM Title: Heading to the Depot
AH I should have copy pasted what I had in that PM...dammit!
Here's chappy 1 notes:
OMG! I can't believe you've shared this with ME!
I fucking love you!
I love this! It is PRICELESS! And I love what you've done with this simple crazy idea! LOL!
You rock my world, BD. ROCK IT! She is fucking awesome and Edward is awesome and I love how she is swooning over him throwing the trash in! LMFAO!
FLUFFING LOVE IT!
THANK you for sharing this awesomeness with me lady. I needed a smile o rama lama!
And here is chappy 2!
LMFAO! "How the hell did she go through all of those condoms since last Thursday? We pick up the trash twice a week. Four days. Countless condoms. I had to get home to think about that. With my bottle of Skin So Soft. Think long and hard."
You = awesomeness...at all times.
LOVE so much.
Date: Feb 21, 2011 02:19 PM Title: Heading to the Depot
I really like what you have so far :) Looking forward to Edward finding out about Bella's profession and how he deals with it.
Thanks for submitting to the GSF.
Thanks for the invite and for your review! It's such a relief to laugh while I write instep of contemplating the meaning of life and shit! M