Date: Mar 09, 2011 08:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow...I think I nearly wet myself laughing haha The image I had of them after they'd fallen out of the tree was hysterical! Oh and the one ball thing...I actually know someone who's balls got twisted and one had to be chopped off, you probabaly know who i'm on about! Best chapter yet I think :o)
Author's Response:
Hmmm... nope I don't know who the uni-baller is. You need to tell me next time I see you. I have my suspicions though.
Glad you liked it. Quite fun to write and I could see them lying on the floor too. Quite an amusing image.
Date: Feb 15, 2011 04:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well, finally got round to reading this chapter and I liked it! Can't wait to find out what happened to Edward back in England!! Surprised you didn't use the Blues though but I suppose Villa were the better option lol
Date: Jan 15, 2011 09:24 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wooo, been waiting age's for this!!
Loved it, can't wait for Chapter 5!!
Author's Response:
Thanks mate. Change of pace with C5 but I'm hoping people like it. :)
Date: Dec 11, 2010 07:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
this is really good
[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2010 07:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
it's really good!!!!edward's relationship with his mum is amazing!!!!write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!pls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2010 02:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
great chapter! all the elements fit really well together and the story flows. I'm really looking forward to everyone meeting! this looks like its going to be an awesome story! just one little not to double check before posting. there were one or two places where letters were left out but nothing major. most people wouldn't notice, i just have a tendency to... love your writing! =]
Date: Sep 04, 2010 06:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
hahahaha.. i love this.. Jasper and Bella's relationship actually reminds me of my best friends and mine. We always would joke around pervertedly :P
Author's Response:
Thanks. I was worried some people wouldn't 'get' the type of friendship Bella and Jasper have. They are both very handsy and perhaps cross the line now and again.
[Report This]Date: Sep 02, 2010 01:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
first time i'm reading this and i love it! i've been searching for a story like this for who knows how long! absolutely love it! looks like its going to be an awesome read!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review! There's a lot in store for our favourite Swan, Cullens and Whitlocks (oh and Alice might have a little something coming her way also...).
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2010 04:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
i had been reading this on fanfiction, and had been praying for the last 4 months that you would start posting again :).. i amvery happy you have!! thank you thank you thank you :)))
Author's Response:
Thanks. This story has been a complete pain in the backside! lol I'll be reworking/rewriting it and continuing. :)