Date: Jul 09, 2012 05:00 PM Title: Chapter 20
The shedding of the pea-coat is obviously key imho. Shedding her past life, insecurities, restrictions?
"Yep. Tex makes you need it. Cleo makes you want it. The hippy brings the porn, and I provide the venue," Amy explains. - Love it! The little get-together with those characters was really entertaining.
Date: Jul 08, 2012 01:47 PM Title: Chapter 4
I think my ovaries need resus after the way you described Edward in those boardshorts!
The interaction between Edward and Milly was absolutely adorable.
Am slightly concerned about Rosalie's expression looking at her wedding ring...
Date: Jul 08, 2012 01:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
"As Marcus gets into the pool, his partner, Felix, hands me their seven month-old son, Caius. I have to wonder what sort of tortures this poor kid is going to endure during his school years, having to go through life with such an utterly pretentious name, on top of having parents who are both fabulously gayer than a bag of butterflies." - Fantastic, sweet-darlin'!
Really love how you've used the characters and Jane sounds like a delight!
Enjoyed this and look forward to what comes. Libby was great :)
Date: Jul 08, 2012 01:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
"...he was often made to feel like an unwanted intruder by the married women - or potential baby daddy material to some of the desperate and dateless single moms." - how very true!
Love the appearance of Libby. Wasn't expecting her at all and look forward to her future pearls of wisdom.